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The Netflix Dystopian Science Fiction Series & # 39; Black Mirror & # 39; was the secret that ensured to the student Lucas Felpi, 17, the thousandth grade of the national high school exam writing of 2018. uses Black Mirror in many essays, "he explained. in an interview granted to G1 this Friday (18) hours after discovering that he was one of 55 Enem 2018 participants to rank among the best of the contest. , 4,122,423 have been corrected in this regular edition.
"I think that" Black Mirror "is a series that addresses many themes, not just technology, nor human behavior, nor human relations" , said Lucas Felpi, student at Rio Branco College of
Although Lucas regards the series as a "jester" for several themes, he says he is happy to meet on November 4 the theme "proof of writing" Enem 2018: "Manipulation of user behavior by the control of data on the Internet ".
"I was happy because it's a very" Black Mirror "theme, yes, it's a very interesting subject, I want to work on it," Lucas said.
Because of the current subject – the algorithms used by Internet Services – the student says that the subject was one of the most appropriate to cite the series.
So he chooses the episode "Hang the DJ", which tells the story of a society in which singles are forced to go out for romantic get-togethers. Their peers, however, are defined by a computer, as is the duration of each relationship, which can last a few hours or years.
"Algorithms restrict the choices of people, the machine filters the options of the human being, works and restricts it more and more, making it the object of manipulations of information" says the student.
How to cite references in Enem's writing
Lucas however explains that he had tried during the Enem test to make sure the external reference that he had brought to the text did not represent an escape from the subject, a problem that, according to the National Institute of Studies and Research on Education, Anísio Teixeira (Inep), Enem 2018, has reduced to zero 0.77% of all tests.
"You have to go to one side of the reference you want to use to adapt the theme," he says. "And always a prospect favorable to his thesis and his argumentation."
He adds that all references and citations to be used to increase the dissertation grade in Enem need not be conventional, especially in topics such as Enem 2018. In addition, Luke suggests that Enem candidates exercise a lot reading, which helps people develop their vocabulary and write better.
To prepare Enem 2018, Lucas, who was in third year of the Branco Branco School of Vianna Granja, claims to have performed 25 tests at the school last year. The training resulted: between 2017, when he started training Enem, and in 2018, his score went from 760 to 1,000.
He also managed to increase the score in all objective tests, to reach 988.7 on the math test, which is almost the maximum score of this edition, which was 996.1.
He says that one week's trial is good for training, but it's possible to prepare it by writing one every fortnight. "A test every two weeks is no problem if you do it right, if you force it and you do it effectively, you can do it."
He adds that another tip that helped him get a good grade was to "decorate" the last paragraph that he would write in the essay. "I use this tactic a lot in the last paragraph, I think, because a lot of people have a hard time intervening, I have a model that, I know, works," he says.
"So, I do not escape the criteria of the proposal: the agent, the action, the mode, the purpose and the details.I have a model that I know that if I am, I will fulfill this task. "
Despite Enem 2018's thousandth grade, Lucas states that he does not intend to study in Brazil. He spent the Fuvest, an entrance exam at the University of São Paulo (USP) and the entrance examination at the State University of Campinas ( Unicamp), but his goal is to graduate in the United States.
In 2018, he applied for positions in at least ten American universities and has already pbaded at least one, the Georgia Institute of Technology in Atlanta.
He also waits for answers from institutions such as Harvard, Yale and MIT, but says his first choice is Stanford University, located in California.
Your goal is to work one day with computer science. "I think I've always been a little pbadionate about technology, finding it fascinating, wanting to understand how it worked." I liked working on Excel, spreadsheets, and the remote control, "said the editor. student, who has already learned to program in several languages.
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